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proof packet

Three assets before the pitch.

Reusable outbound templates for founder-led web design and local SEO agencies, each shown with one filled public-prospect example.

asset 01

Homepage teardown

Turn one public page observation into a useful opening note.

reusable template

  • Page opened: URL, offer, intended buyer.
  • First visible promise: what appears before scroll.
  • Friction to mark: proof, CTA, or clarity gap.
  • Outbound line: observation, reason, next asset.

filled example

  • Prospect: Hook Agency.
  • Public signal: contractor SEO education and website work.
  • Teardown note: put roofing proof before service navigation.
  • Opening angle: show job-specific proof before the pitch.
hookagency.comfirst-fold mark-up
public page read

Contractor SEO content is strong. The first fold hides the proof.

offer

SEO + websites for contractors

mark

Proof arrives after navigation

send

Roofing page proof packet

outbound line

Lead with the roofing proof before the service menu.

The email opens with one visible issue and attaches the marked first-fold asset.

asset 02

Landing-page wireframe

Sketch the better first scroll before asking for a conversation.

filled example

Contractor Growth Network

More qualified contractor calls from local search.

roofingcase proofaudit CTA

niche

Contractors

result

Booked calls

trust

Review signal

reusable template

  • Hero promise: one buyer, one outcome, one qualifier.
  • Proof strip: three facts the founder can verify.
  • Conversion path: primary CTA, backup CTA, trust cue.
  • Missing piece: what to add, cut, or reorder.

filled example summary

  • Prospect: Contractor Growth Network.
  • Hero: More qualified contractor calls from local search.
  • Proof row: niche, result, review signal.
  • Missing piece: before/after lead-quality panel near the top.

asset 03

Offer-positioning audit

Compress a broad agency offer into one testable outbound wedge.

reusable template

  • Buyer: the segment worth testing first.
  • Outcome: the result that makes a reply rational.
  • Proof: evidence needed to believe it.
  • Disqualifier: who should not enter the batch.

filled example

offer-positioning audit

Blue Corona wedge memo

A broad home-services offer becomes one reply-worthy test.

Buyer

Local-service segment

HVAC firms with review gaps

Outcome

Reply-worthy result

More booked calls from local search

Proof

Public evidence needed

GBP movement, call source, review velocity

Disqualifier

Who stays out

No service-area priority or owner

Bring one offer. Leave with the first packet.